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º»¹®³»¿ë Would you like to see some changes in your life? Humans are supposed to want some changes because it¡¯s human nature. Even if they got high quality goods, they want higher one.
First, Students like me are suffering from their school score because they get low point even if they study as much as they can to get high score or go up to high classes. In my case, I¡¯m trying to study to go up to high classes and go to Canada. I don¡¯t want to go back to Korea because education of Korea is not fit for me. They always let us memorize so I¡¯m studying a lot to improve my English so that I don¡¯t have to go back to Korea later. However the thing is that my brain is not good enough to put knowledge what I want so I need better brain than now. Mine is not really bad so at least I don¡¯t get really low score but I think it¡¯s still not fit for me.
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